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Baby, Why do you hurt yourself?
Why do you endanger your health?
Cry yourself to sleep at night,
Hide away from what is right.

Baby, Why do you live a lie?
Smile, when you cry inside,
Pretend like you're so strong,
But really this is just all wrong.

Baby, What do you achieve from this?
Lulling yourself, into a sick abyss?
A wicked glimmer in your eye,
As you grin and say goodbye.
Kinda dark, weird. Scary!
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lackofevolution Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2008
excellent take on the despair that to a degree effects everyone, i love this outlook due to the fact its similar to me
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LLthePeacemaker Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2008
aww thanks.. wondeful insight once again!
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LLthePeacemaker Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2008
true say x
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SmilingOnTheInside Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2007
This is really dark actually. Kinda eeire demonic leer like. My kind darkness lol
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LLthePeacemaker Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2007
lOl.. dark is cool.. sometimes xxx
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SmilingOnTheInside Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2008
Yep. Sometimes...
Especially in the form of Edward Cullen...
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LLthePeacemaker Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2008
yup.. that kinda darkness is appealling. god.. why am i such a sucker for EC ??? x
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SmilingOnTheInside Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2008
lol. We all are
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PaintTheSkyRed Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
This is basically me in a poem. ^_^' I really enjoyed reading this.
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LLthePeacemaker Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2007
yay! x
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KryssBranzi Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2007
coolies sounds a bit like me *narrows eyes* lol mwah x x x ure awesome writer
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LLthePeacemaker Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2007
Merci gorgeous!!! I return the compliment!
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KryssBranzi Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2007
*blushes* thank u
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Purplegem Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2007   Writer
Luved it mucho compadre!
Coolio!
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LLthePeacemaker Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2007
Thank You!!! yaaaayyyy!!
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Miloh Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2007
Nice one! :)
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LLthePeacemaker Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2007
:) :) :)
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demonthief13 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2007
Yeah that is quite dark.
Very good though.
:)
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LLthePeacemaker Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2007
thanks!!! i don't even know how i wrote it!!!

loveage xx
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